Will you respond to this?

S1V4 makes the confusion in here. Otherwise a philosophically emotional nice poem. The kind I like. Plus: The phrase "There is something waiting-working-waking-wanting here". We can refer to it twice, and then report to a hint of what this "something" is, abstractly, just to provoke the mind of the reader. I like the philosophical point of view, the discipline of the word handling... Nice transfer to a good dimension. Bravo!